In Reply to: JBR part 2 posted by Charlz_Again on Wednesday, 3. September 2008 at 13:30 Bali Time:
You used paragraphs!! AND uppercase where appropriate, not to mention correct grammar & punctuation!! Also - and this is your worst error - you didn't use an apostrophe before the s in every word ending with s. Disable spellcheck!
Also, not enough info about body functions & toilets. And nowhere near enough details of the food each of you ate, what you did every second of the day and you have not included raves about all your very many Balinese friends who are your other family and just love you for yourself.